Another excellent case study with thorough analysis, well written and thoughtful. You are clear on elements that inspire you. You could be clearer on the way that performance and narrative weave together- and how this might inspire you. V
A solid comprehension of the text you are analysing and how it has been constructed. What is great is that you have discussed how you have taken inspiration from the texts to inform your own product. You have looked at both the technical and narrative construction which is great. Esther
Another excellent case study with thorough analysis, well written and thoughtful. You are clear on elements that inspire you. You could be clearer on the way that performance and narrative weave together- and how this might inspire you. V
ReplyDeleteThank you, I have added to the performance and narrative.
DeleteA solid comprehension of the text you are analysing and how it has been constructed. What is great is that you have discussed how you have taken inspiration from the texts to inform your own product. You have looked at both the technical and narrative construction which is great. Esther
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